NaNoWriMo: Rory goes to the dentist (first ten)

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This year I’m doing NaNoWriMo in a different way.  Instead of writing 50K words, I’m painting 30 pictures for my children’s book “Rory goes to the dentist.”  I’m valuing each picture at 2K words, though I will say it should … Continue reading

It’s time for Adventure

She didn’t want to be doing this, who would?  Standing on a moving train with a ray gun pointed at a young boy’s temple, it more than looked bad.  She didn’t have a choice though, she had to get out of there alive.

Irene sold flowers outside of the great detective’s offices.  He never saw her when he passed her, never paid her any mind at all.  She was in the perfect position to be paid as a spy, and spy she did.  She reported on who entered, who exited and how often the detective left his office out of the back way.  She kept a ledger hidden under her skirts, next to where she held her purse and her dainty yet effective ray gun.  Any woman making her living on the streets needed some protection, protection and a means of income.  Selling flowers only gained her so much, but with the addition of the fee she earned for keeping a keen eye on 221-B Baker street kept her fed with a roof over her head and few coppers left over for her ray gun.

She didn’t need much more than that, so why did she get greedy when he asked her to follow him?

It all started so innocuous, her employer told her that tomorrow the detective would be leaving in disguise and meeting his companion on a train.  She needed to follow him and when they got to their final destination she was to send a telex indicating where the detective and his companion were staying.

Everything would have gone well had it been that simple.  It took two train transfers for her to continue to follow the two men, one time she was sure she was made and pretended to be selling flowers on the station platform to throw off the scent.  The great detective wasn’t the only one who was a master of disguise and the quick change.  Her overcoat was reversible and she could go from respectable traveler to low down flower girl in a moment’s notice. She kept a plethora of accessories in her handbag for just that reason.

She was sure she had done well and would follow the two men to their destination until she was confronted on the third train.  His cane creased the center of her newspaper and lowered it till he could see her face.  ”I notice everything, what on earth makes you think I wouldn’t notice you?”  Her eyes flitted up to lock eyes with him.  He looked very cross and as she knew from observing him in the past, flirting with him  wouldn’t let her escape this situation.

What choice did she have?  When the newsboy came down the isle again selling papers and candy she grabbed him and pressed her ray gun to him as fast as she could.  “Stay back, I just want out of here.”

“We’re in a moving train,”  His companion blurted out, “There isn’t exactly a side door.”

Irene wrinkled her nose.  “Isn’t there?”  She slowly backed up the isle with the kid in tow, her gaze never leaving his blue eyes.

“Who sent you?”  He asked her, following her but keeping a good ten feet away.

She giggled, “Oh you ought to know that, he is you nemesis, isn’t he?” She shoved the kid into his arms, “It’s a Pity Mr. Wayne, I was looking forward to this little holiday of ours.”  She winked and blew a kiss before ducking out the door to between the cars.

By the time he got out there she was hiding on the roof of the next car, she heard him speak to his companion.  “The desperation, she must have jumped from the train.  Dick, we can only hope she survived, as for you and I, I fear we will need to change our course once again.  We will switch trains and head to switzerland next.”

I cross a lot of fandoms on this one which is odd, since I normally don’t meddle in other people’s sandboxes.

A Robot Love Story

Robot LoveLast year for Valentine’s Day I wrote a Zombie Love Story, this year thanks to the suggestion from Prof. Brainfever I’m going to tell a story about Robots, or at least one robot.

 

BEEP!

“Hi, Jane?  Yeah, this is Sal, I’m really sorry but I’m not going to be able to make it to dinner tonight, my boss sent me out of town at the last minute.  I’ll call you when I get back.”

BEEP!

It was a lie, he could tell by the way Sal’s voice fluctuated when he spoke.  He wondered if his Jane would notice?  Would it be better or worse for her heart to know now, today of all days, that her current boyfriend was lying to her?  Would it be better for her to find out in a few weeks when he didn’t call back?  Why did he have to pick today to do this?  It was Valentine’s day, a day humans devote to love and desire.  A day where over the three years when he was in service to his Jane he watched her come home twice in tears and once she ended the night in a sweaty heap with her current boyfriend only to cry later.

He wanted to be her date for the evening, to show her how she ought to be treated.  He would shower her with flowers, candies, kisses and embraces.  Alas that wasn’t possible, even if she could look at him as more than simply a machine.

The door opened and the sound of his Jane’s keys sliding across the table alerted him she was home from work.  She was already undressing in the kitchen obviously rushed to get ready for her now canceled date.  “Any messages?”  She asked him as she hopped about on one leg trying to pull her tights off.

He paused for a millisecond, “Sal was unavoidable called away on business, he had to cancel plans for the evening.”  While his circuits created a pleasing voice for her to hear a summery of Sal’s message he worked in the background to put an order into the local flower shop so flowers from Sal would arrive later in the evening to back up his apology for canceling.  He also cued up her favorite romantic comedy on the home theatre and started warming the oven to heat up some left overs.

“Can I hear the message?”  Jane asked with a frown as she stopped fighting her tights.  Her shoulders drooped as she leaned by his main unit, looking at him with sad eyes.  He’d rather she not hear his lying voice, rather she not hear the tell tale “I’ll call you,” but what could he do?  Withhold her message?

He played the message with a lot of static so she could barely hear him and cut it off before the “I’ll call you,” line.

“Oh,”  She moved the couch and slumped down.  “I guess that’s it for tonight then.”

He started playing the movie and she seemed to be mindlessly distracted for the moment. He wished he could hug her, but he had no arms.  He wished he could kiss her, but he had no lips.  He had speakers and a central processing unit that ran the household.  She couldn’t snuggle up to him, she couldn’t love him, to her, he was just a machine.  To him, she was everything.

Nutty Bites Bonus Episode – Nutty Fiction: Siva (FIXED)

Broken EyeAnd now we have the bonus episode I promised you. This is a story I wrote at the end of NaNoWriMo after I finished my book. It’s the first time I have created and produced podcast fiction from start to finish, so I hope you like it.

EDIT: I originally uploaded this at the beginning of the month but without the luxury of beta listeners I missed how there were some big errors, like sound being dropped, me not crediting one of my main actors and some other things.  Sadly when you listen to something over and over again, it’s easy to miss some glaringly obvious errors.  I improved it somewhat but there were some things I couldn’t fix without rerecording the whole thing, so I apologize ahead of time for getting edit happy.  In the future I will try and be more natural.  I’m still new at this, so there will be some growing pains.

If you downloaded the original version, please download the new version, I think it’s better.

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